Super piece of work! Totally agree with the kindly thorough feedback you have received below. Would love to see more low poly assets dressing the sides of the track and things like that. Looking forward to seeing what you produce later in the year.
This is an extremely well put together project! I love the low-poly look of the piece, giving it a cute charm, and the little blimp flying around is an extra detail that I really like. Obviously, the most impressive part is the animation, whilst seeming simple, covers the track loop perfectly, without any cuts to the collision or stops.
To improve, I would suggest a change of speed in some parts of the animation - what if the cars slowed on corners, and accelerated on straights? Honestly, though, I love this, and think it's very cute! Keep it up, strawbie!!
I find the animation part of your project extremely impressive. The karts go round at a good speed and are spaced differently, giving it a very realistic effect. I love the low poly style so it was cool seeing it featured in your FMP. I definitely like the additional trees you added and feel it really made the project come together. I also love how in post-processing you made it look like it is set at sunset/sunrise as it really adds to the chill vibes to it.
To improve the project, I think you could expand the track and potentially fill in some more of the empty space. I also think it would be cool to experiment with having the diorama on an island rather than a flat plane.
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Super piece of work! Totally agree with the kindly thorough feedback you have received below. Would love to see more low poly assets dressing the sides of the track and things like that. Looking forward to seeing what you produce later in the year.
This is an extremely well put together project! I love the low-poly look of the piece, giving it a cute charm, and the little blimp flying around is an extra detail that I really like. Obviously, the most impressive part is the animation, whilst seeming simple, covers the track loop perfectly, without any cuts to the collision or stops.
To improve, I would suggest a change of speed in some parts of the animation - what if the cars slowed on corners, and accelerated on straights? Honestly, though, I love this, and think it's very cute! Keep it up, strawbie!!
Overall I really like it my only complaint would be that the scene is a bit empty in places but overall. 8.5/10
I find the animation part of your project extremely impressive. The karts go round at a good speed and are spaced differently, giving it a very realistic effect. I love the low poly style so it was cool seeing it featured in your FMP. I definitely like the additional trees you added and feel it really made the project come together. I also love how in post-processing you made it look like it is set at sunset/sunrise as it really adds to the chill vibes to it.
To improve the project, I think you could expand the track and potentially fill in some more of the empty space. I also think it would be cool to experiment with having the diorama on an island rather than a flat plane.